Dans feedback on rough cut

Dan watched a very rough version of our final title sequence, and has gave us some constructive criticism.

• There were a couple shots that contained zooms, We were told to delete them.  
• There were other pointless bits and pieces, We were told to try make them better with editing 

we were told to try to make them better by making them last longer in slow motion or just cut them completely,after attempting to fit these shots in, we came to a conclusion that our overall title sequence will be better without these shots.